tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206546663476741120.post485355880578480330..comments2010-01-25T15:11:40.857+02:00Comments on smile:): People ALWAYS Want MoreMaria Batchvarovahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17251873465592821355noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206546663476741120.post-7850928050500546762009-11-16T15:07:01.919+02:002009-11-16T15:07:01.919+02:00Very good....Very good....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206546663476741120.post-55782427021569319942009-11-07T02:51:00.715+02:002009-11-07T02:51:00.715+02:00You're right. Life is only worth living when t...You're right. Life is only worth living when there is excitement. A goal is important, or no one would have any reason to live.Kristianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02830685701484826356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206546663476741120.post-17041548224603326132009-11-02T17:17:33.492+02:002009-11-02T17:17:33.492+02:00I included the technology part in order to give an...I included the technology part in order to give another example of the things that people want. The feelings and experiences are another example that illustrates my thesis. I hope I made it clear for you:) Thanks for the comment and all of the positive things:))Maria Batchvarovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17251873465592821355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206546663476741120.post-19617818872095922862009-11-02T00:13:12.877+02:002009-11-02T00:13:12.877+02:00Mimi :) I find your essay very interesting. You ha...Mimi :) I find your essay very interesting. You have expressed your thoughts clearly and vividly. My favorite part is the last paragraph, in which you explain what exactly stimulates us, to feel alive. Sentences as:” The point of life is to enjoy every minute of it because it is not everlasting!”, made me think about my life. Also your sentences are perfectly chosen. Their structure helps the reader to understand the message of your essay easily. I believe that your essay would be interesting to your targeted readers, but I believe that it is appealing for all ages. <br /> Even though, your essay has far more positive aspects then negative, nothing is absolutely perfect. What I did not understand is how you managed to connect the advances in technology, which you mainly discussed in your body paragraphs, and manage to conclude with a paragraph about extreme feelings and experiences. <br /> To end this on a positive note, I was moved by your essay. I think that you can influence people’s believes with your skills, and this is amazing.Bibi P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15128995496536003823noreply@blogger.com